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Needless repetition of verb phrases: Save your energy, life is short

Posted on June 9th, 2009 by by Administrator

ecently, a friend described a meal he had savored at a good local restaurant. He said to me: “I would have wanted to have eaten every course.” He might have said more plainly and economically: “I would have wanted to eat every course.” The problem is my friend’s sequencing of [...]

Michael Phelps loses touch of his grammar

Posted on May 12th, 2009 by by Administrator

In winning the seventh of his eight gold medals in the Olympic “Water Cube” in Beijing, Michael Phelps recounted his proper choice of taking one final stroke before touching the wall. In taking “a final half stroke” instead of gliding as had his Serbian opponent in an adjacent lane,
Phelps secured first place by a “finger [...]

Imperfect in the simple future

Posted on January 15th, 2009 by by Administrator

Gary Klein, beat writer for the University of Southern California
Trojan football team, said of Willie Tuitama, an opposing quarterback
for the University of Arizona Wildcats, a team USC would soon face:
“Arizona’s Wilie Tuitama qualifies as the most experienced passer the
Trojans will face during the conference schedule.”
Klein meant to say: “…qualifies as the most experienced passer the
Trojans [...]